“Paul Jutra’s life is about to become a living hell, the problem is, Paul doesn’t remember. Doesn’t remember much of anything, prior to waking up in a hospital bed with a raging headache.”
The prologue of this novel, which I’m about to start work on (well, this winter at least) is now up for review on my writing website, HERE!
I would appreciate any feedback anyone would care to give, even if it’s just to tell me you spotted a spelling mistake. And if anyone would like to be a BETA reader for me, let me know.
This novel started out with a tongue-twisting title I’ve now since abandoned, and who wouldn’t, it was awful: THE DIOSCURI STRATAGEM is now DECEPTION POINT — yes, even though that title has already been used by another, eh, more famous author.
I decided that Deception Point was a better fit. It was, in fact, one of the original titles I’d chosen, but abandoned after doing an online search. I mean, no one really wants to have the same title as another author, especially if that title and or certain someone else is a lot more famous than you. But, the more I thought about it, the more I wanted Deception Point, and so, here we are. I’ve renamed my WIP back to what I wanted.
Oh, and FYI, as for the word “dioscuri” check this out. It might give you a clue about what I’m writing about. What, no?